A Field Guide to Otherkin?

[frameacloud]

I’m writing a commentary on Lupa’s book, A Field Guide to Otherkin. (I have Lupa’s permission to do this.) The commentary offers errata and updates for the Field Guide. I also want to collect opinions on specific parts of the Field Guide from other readers. Have you read the Field Guide?

Are there specific parts of the book where you saw mistakes, where you had opinions about how Lupa should have written something differently, or where you wanted to interject some additional information?

I think I've found all of the mistakes, so right now I'm more interested in readers' opinions on whichever passages stood out to them the most.

[Edited, same day, just a few minutes later, to add clarification on what I'm looking for.]